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Weeeeeeeeeee!

I like Fitch and Jove more than pizza!

If you ever put out an album of silly songs, I will buy it.

I always look forward to these

Funny stuff guys! Good job on the story It all fit together nicely.

Favourites list.

Excellent!

That was fantastic! Great song and animation. They we're combined extremely well!

The only thing I would have liked to see was one more big rockin' chorus after the sad part at the end. I think that would have punched it up one more notch.

Definitely a big 5 though! Sweet.

Craig Schriver

So true!

That was great. It's funny because it's true!

Craig Schriver

Constructive Criticism

That looks like a pretty neat concept you have there. The animation was well done for the most part. It looks like you used a lot of rotoscoping. Cool action.

My only suggestion is to change the dialogue in one spot. When he says "I say screw the past...", I suggest you change it to 'forget the past', or something like that. 'Screw', in that context, isn't an 'all-ages' kind of word.

Just my opinion. Cool show!

Really Creative and Original

After I watched these two gems I checked out your website too. The artwork has come a long way and the humor has always been solid! Great sense of humor and comic timing.

And I understand you do most of the music too? It's wicked!

I'll keep an eye out for more of your cartoons in the future.

Craig Schriver

margarine responds:

Except for the drum solos in the previous episodes (my good chum Alex Porter does those), I do ALL the music :D
Thanks for the top class review!

Constructive Criticism

Hey, that was a pretty good movie. You could improve it by adding a few more gags in the whole factory process. The timing was nice. There's lot's of opportunity to add more gags though.

remyzero responds:

hahhaha thanks, I thought I had less time than I did, and that's why it ended up being so short.

Cool.

Very cool.

I voted 5.

Constructive Criticism

Hi there,

Your animation was not bad!

In my opinion, the clock 'robot' voice is terribly overused. You would be able to put a lot more emotion into your characters if you used a real voice. It wouldn't be so monotone.

I'm sure your next submission will be even better!

Craig Schriver

That was hilarious!

That was really funny, and very original. Totally rediculous! I liked it.

Craig Schriver @CraigSchriver

Age 41, Male

Animator|Designer

Canada

Joined on 3/19/06

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