Score: 10

"Weeeeeeeeeee!"

submission: Fitch and Jove 7

date: December 4, 2006

I like Fitch and Jove more than pizza!

If you ever put out an album of silly songs, I will buy it.

Score: 10

"I always look forward to these"

submission: Tomorrow's Nobodies Ep.4

date: May 4, 2006

Funny stuff guys! Good job on the story It all fit together nicely.

Favourites list.

Score: 10

"Excellent!"

submission: the PICO DAY anthem

date: April 30, 2006

That was fantastic! Great song and animation. They we're combined extremely well!

The only thing I would have liked to see was one more big rockin' chorus after the sad part at the end. I think that would have punched it up one more notch.

Definitely a big 5 though! Sweet.

Craig Schriver

Score: 9

"So true!"

submission: Jeffrey Faden's BUS

date: April 28, 2006

That was great. It's funny because it's true!

Craig Schriver

Score: 9

"Constructive Criticism"

submission: Freerun: Go-Man, Scene 1

date: April 26, 2006

That looks like a pretty neat concept you have there. The animation was well done for the most part. It looks like you used a lot of rotoscoping. Cool action.

My only suggestion is to change the dialogue in one spot. When he says "I say screw the past...", I suggest you change it to 'forget the past', or something like that. 'Screw', in that context, isn't an 'all-ages' kind of word.

Just my opinion. Cool show!

Score: 10

"Really Creative and Original"

submission: Fitch and Jove 5 (Part 2)

date: April 22, 2006

After I watched these two gems I checked out your website too. The artwork has come a long way and the humor has always been solid! Great sense of humor and comic timing.

And I understand you do most of the music too? It's wicked!

I'll keep an eye out for more of your cartoons in the future.

Craig Schriver

Score: 8

"Constructive Criticism"

submission: Blobbs animation test

date: April 15, 2006

Hey, that wasn't bad at all! Here's some advice:

The gradient circle clouds aren't super appealing. Maybe you should draw them and add some 2-tone shading.

When the guy smacks into the camera, maybe you could have him squash and stretch a little bit to help register the impact. The cracking of the glass is nice.

When he falls off of the glass, maybe you should add a camera shake with the sound FX. Nothing extreme, just a little one.

This one would be a lot of extra work, but instead of having the black circle cover the screen to reveal the credits, perhaps you could have the glass shatter away to reveal your site logo. That'd be awesome.

Hope that was helpful! Good work.

Score: 7

"Constructive Criticism"

submission: Easter Eggs

date: April 15, 2006

Hey, that was a pretty good movie. You could improve it by adding a few more gags in the whole factory process. The timing was nice. There's lot's of opportunity to add more gags though.

Score: 10

"Cool."

submission: -For What It's Worth-

date: April 14, 2006

Very cool.

I voted 5.

Score: 5

"Constructive Criticism"

submission: Saturn Clock Adventures 1

date: April 5, 2006

Hi there,

Your animation was not bad!

In my opinion, the clock 'robot' voice is terribly overused. You would be able to put a lot more emotion into your characters if you used a real voice. It wouldn't be so monotone.

I'm sure your next submission will be even better!

Craig Schriver